Fall is not my favorite seasons but I really enjoy several things about fall.
First of all, Fall is the season between winter and summer which means, it's not too cold or too hot. Therefore, a lot of people enjoy going on a vacation like visiting Florida before winter and release stress. I still remember that our family used to visit other countries during the fall seasons. This is because, there were a lot of spectacular festival that can experienced different cultures. Furthermore, there were a lot of place where you can enjoy beautiful views with leaves blowing away especially the place where leaves started to change cherry blossoms. On the other hand, those environment also make me feel solitary because all the surrounding people were all chilling with their girlfriends but I am not.
Second of all, my main reason why I like this season is because of Fashion. A lot of famous stylist called Fall, Fashion Season, because this weather gives us to choose variety of different kinds of clothes like wearing winter Jacket, long sleeves, Sweather or etc. Famous stylist, G-Dragon, has his own website of Fall seasons clothes collections. This fashion become so popular among the Korean people all the time because of harmonious color.
On the other hand, another way to termed fall is "Tired seasons". This is because a lot of people feel tired of working on school and missing summer vacation. Therefore, they will always have bad mood and lose desire to do something, so a lot of people prefer staying at home and chill instead of being active in outdoor.
I agree. Fall is the best season for fashion. You are doing a very good job using transitions in your paragraphs. Please proofread for grammar. 14/20
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